He will be...

He will be forever summer,
a warm, floral scented breeze,
blue skies and single clouds,
clouds that drift slowly, silently, to a place unknown,
perhaps to where he now rests, peacefully,
with those that went before...

He will be an aching heart and tears,
a pain that only time can heal,
a chasm to be filled with memories,
memories of childhood days,
of sibling love, laughter,
of all that is good in life,
in mankind.

He will be stories and smiles,
a warm glow,
dreams,
loved,
loved,
loved...

and forever missed.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

he or she will be so missed...and i have loved and lost and remembered...and still remember.
So easily relate-able this piece is.

[Gee]

Thank you Jacob.
Hope you are well.

[Relic]

This is so touching, it could be part of a eulogy. Great writing, Gee.

[Gee]

Thanks Relic

[Ana Papaya]

Gee, this is so moving and comes at at time when my own loss is weighing so heavy on my mind.

[Gee]

I'm sorry to read that Ana. Take care.
Thank you

[Lanny]

A most touching tribute with such moving emotional currency. Truly a richly sentimental reflection done with honour and sensitivity.

Nicely done, and all the best,

Lanny

[Gee]

Thank you Lanny. Appreciate you taking the time to read and comment

[Lanny]

You are most welcome.
All the best,
Lanny

[Neville]

supersonic Gee.. beautiful words indeed, I know that feeling and I share that view N

[Gee]

Cheers Neville.
Hope all is well out in the windy west

[Neville]

tis bloomin windy today...

[Einstein Noodle]

how very beautiful, Gee ... :( touches my heart and soul ... to have fond memories when the pain of loss is softened .. is an incredible blessing ... and actually your poem turns my eyes to those with me ... i think i will let them know how i love them and miss them now ... well crafted, emotive universal poem
E.

[Gee]

Cheers E, I'm glad you approve.
Hope all is well with you :)

[emmajoy]

Gee, these are such wonderful, true and sincere words. My heart's truly pounding - and somehow, smiling. Thank you.

'He will be stories and smiles, a warm glow, dreams, loved, loved, loved....... '

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderful sentiment in your lines Gee. You have conveyed here how I feel about the loss of my younger brother. Ever loved, ever in. my heart and missed dreadfully. Beautifully conveyed. Good morning to you.

Chris

[Gee]

Good morning Christine, thank you. Always a bit iffy about posting writing about " stuff " I'm yet to experience.
Hope all is well in Bed is :))

[Gee]

Berks......

[Chris Shaw]

Come back for a second read Gee. Your lines make me reflect on my brother as it is birthday soon. Poignancy in your lines. Good morning from Berks to Bucks.

Chris

[Gee]

Much thinking done in the quiet hours, for me the best time of the day.
Thanks for revisiting :)

[Chris Shaw]

It was worth it. I quite like to reread at a later date.