Stolen

The story of a girl whose friend leaves her and she figures out why her friend left her.

One minute laughter

Fighting the next

What just happened

To being best friends?

Twisting wrong

Falling fast

Painful landing

And yet she laughs

The pain I feel

In my leg

Is nothing compared

To the pain inside my mind

You cheated and lied

And mocked me

Because you wanted to win

And steal my reason for living

My heart is now broken

And filled with dread

Because I'm scared

To lose my heart

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

Very intriguing, an unusual take on friendship and loss. Very emotional, the sadness is well woven into the poem, love it x

[Hope Rose]

Glad you like it. :) Sorry for the late reply

[Hope Rose]

Glad you like it. :) Sorry for the late reply

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

oh my gosh, this poem makes me want to cry, so sorry. so sad poem and beautiful poem.........so sad

[Hope Rose]

im working on another one, but idk what to call it yet

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

are you going to post it?

[Hope Rose]

yeah just posted

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

will read it and review it

[Hope Rose]

k ,

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

just read it and reviewed it

[Hope Rose]

Thanks......

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome........