I Miss You

For my love, who hopefully will understand the truth in these words.

I wish I could

Say I'm alright

But truth be told

I barely get by

I wish I could

laugh with someone

Instead I sit here

with no one

Why did you

decide to leave?

What does she have

that I don't?

I wish I knew

A way to move on

But I guess

I'll just say

"I miss you"

Author's Note

Just an interesting tidbit:
I'm thinking of making this into a song, and if you want to cowrite it, I'm more than willing. Just don't take all the credit, please.

Reviews

[LA.Kin]

I find this to be very emotional and passionate please write more.

[Hope Rose]

Would you like to see the song that I am making out of this? I could post what I have so far

[LA.Kin]

Yes please. id like that very much.

[Hope Rose]

Alright, I'll post it in a couple of hours when I get into my study hall.

[LA.Kin]

cant wait thank you shadow.

[Hope Rose]

No problem glad I can make someone happy today.

[LA.Kin]

Your writing and comments are something I'm looking forward to when ever I'm on.

[Hope Rose]

Really? That's strange.

[LA.Kin]

Your very truthful and your honesty is quit refreshing.

[LA.Kin]

I probable should have opened with that huh?

[Hope Rose]

That's the first time I've ever heard that. Thanks.

[LA.Kin]

no problem.

[BlaqkShadow]

I really like the structure it adds to the overall feel of the poem, it reads really well and the space at the end before "I miss you" gives it a proper dramatic feel. Brilliant stuff, keep it up X :D

[Hope Rose]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[JakeDragneel]

who are you talking about ?! I dont have any one ... seriously

[Hope Rose]

just something that i was thinking of making into a song ive had this for a while no joke