My Evil Eyes

My Evil Eyes

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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A song lyric I wrote about people scared to meet me. It gets heavy at the end.

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When I meet you, all you do is run away

Why you afraid of me?

Why you scared of me? 

When you look into my evil eyes


What do I ever do to you?


Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

It destroyed everything in my life


All I want is to be your friend

But you run away from me

Why you hate me?

What did I do to you?

Are you scared of my evil eyes?

 

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

It destroyed everything in my life

 

Heavy solo

 

Why you think I’m a stalker?

I won’t do anything to hurt you

Why you scared of me?

When you look into my evil eyes

 

 

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

It destroyed everything in my life

 

Heavy solo

 

Death metal vocals repeat


Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

Now you see in my evil eyes

© 2010 HorrorMaster


Author's Note

HorrorMaster
You can listen to me singing it in my band page. http://www.myspace.com/everybodydiesband

I know we need to practice more to that song. My singing is a little weak in it, but I tried.

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If this is about being judged why do you refer to yourself as having evil eyes? It sounds like you're down on yourself, or judging yourself as evil before anyone else can. Using the word evil referring to yourself throws the reader off a bit. I do like this a lot ( don't get me wrong here), and reading your explanation below does help to see it the way you meant it to be.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Too bad others have to make you feel that way. When I read this I got a vision (sort of) of someone with creepy snake like eyes, you must be feeling really bad because of these people who reject you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a great song. I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


If this is about being judged why do you refer to yourself as having evil eyes? It sounds like you're down on yourself, or judging yourself as evil before anyone else can. Using the word evil referring to yourself throws the reader off a bit. I do like this a lot ( don't get me wrong here), and reading your explanation below does help to see it the way you meant it to be.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

very interesting... nice one!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great lyrics and its asking an interesting question. I wonder what the answer would be.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought this was a great song. I think it will be very successful. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 11, 2010
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HorrorMaster
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Tamarac, FL



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