Desert

Desert

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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This poem is about a lonely scared man in a hot desert.

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 I stand alone in a deep sand.

The sun burning my skin.

It feels like I am in middle of nowhere.

I begin walking as fast as I can,

The sun burning my eyes.

I am surprised they cannot find me.

Ah god, my skin is peeling off from the heat,

It’s beating me to death.

I must get out of here.

I called out, "Help! Help!"

No one heard me.

Sand dust covered my legs.

My throat started to get dry,

I need water, so I can survive.

Now snakes jumped out of the sand.

They came near me,

as they started biting my legs.

I started to use my legs to push them out of the way.

I tried my best to run away from them.

   It feels like I am living in a hot coffin filled with sand.

The fear of my life will never be the same.

My day in this desert will never be forgotten.


                  

© 2011 HorrorMaster


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The story of the desert is amazing. Thank you to the U.S Army. I spend years in the desert. Your story is true. The heat and the snakes/spiders are the enemies. Many a days we changed our path for the snakes have the right of way in the desert. A very good story.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


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You hit it well out of the park this time. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


cool poem the desert could be killer


Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice. The desert can really be a killer...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Your imagery in this piece turned out nicely, giving us a nice look at the desert. I wasn't sure how the track fit in on the first read, but I slowed down a bit on the second one and got into the feel. I liked the lack of rhyming through the piece, as it seemed to allow it to flow a bit more and allowed you to express a greater amount of freedom. Good work once again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


There is great description to this story you have woven upon this paper for all to read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


U are a gifted writer.

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is really good, well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very good write. Great visuals and good expressions of fear and being alone and lost.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love that poem. Great job. It's really great. =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


That would teach us the value of life

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 26, 2010
Last Updated on July 20, 2011
Tags: Fear, poem, survival, sand, heat

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HorrorMaster
HorrorMaster

Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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