Rosalinda

Rosalinda

A Story by Hunny A.
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When You Want To Get Over A Lost Love After A Great Realation Ship... And You Find Out That It Was Fake...

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I'm smelling your perfume everywhere.... And it's weird because i smell it every time I think about letting you go...I want to move on.. To leave you fade away with your memories in our past... I don't want to feel your kisses anymore....Your soul is around me all the time it catches me every time I decide to run away from you...I want you out of my life I need my heartache to be cured so please pull your knife and clean my black blood with your dirty hands....I want to hate you... you left me alone in the unknown without knowing how to start my life again without you in it.... Your voice is haunting me in the night... Is keeping me in a prison where not forgetting you is a law... Where you are the judge who judged me for a lifetime period.... Why is it so hard to forget? While knowing that your loving someone else... I want my life back... Missing you does hurt... Stay away... Leave me by my own... Is it too much to ask for?

© 2012 Hunny A.


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I think this is Beautiful and sad at the same time , we all walked through this Path.... so we do understand how it feels like when your heart is bleeding without anyway to ease the pain ....... you played with the words , you made me feel your pain , this is a great story ... thank you Yos

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hunny A.

10 Years Ago

I'm Glad To Hear That!
It's Just That I Write With Emotions!
You Can Say That Emotions A.. read more
this is the way i felt 2 years ago after i broke up with my gf , but now i am fine and ready to find someone new

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hunny A.

10 Years Ago

Yea You Should At The End Move On And Find A Better Life...
Thank You For Reading!
I like it. I think it's cool and a bit dark. Though I would add some comma's places, you know, grammar stuff. But good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SmileBig :)

10 Years Ago

Haha it's ok, I do that too'! Seriously, the last story I wrote there were 15 times i did the ... An.. read more
Hunny A.

10 Years Ago

Haha!
Next Time I'll Edit It Too!
Thank You For The Tip Anyways!
SmileBig :)

10 Years Ago

No problem :)

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