But I Still Cry For You

I don't know about this poem.

But I Too Cry For You.

It was my fault,
But i can't let you go,
It was all default,
But I too, cry for you.

Things are getting hazy,
You died on me,
I'm starting to go crazy,
But I too, cry for you.

Imprisoned by a state of mind,
Lost by what has been done,
The truth is now so blind,
But I too, cry for you.

You did this to me,
Put me in this state,
This state has no key,
But I too, cry for you.

I am locked alone,
Still hating you,
But I am just unknown,
But I too, cry for you.

You were never sorry,
When you hurt me like this,
At least the night is starry,
And I still cry for you.

Reviews

[Mark]

"No matter how often or how badly you abuse me, neglect me/
Yet, do I and my sorrow sit here in the dark/
Swaying in a gently counterpoint
Of pain...And hope"

[lastchildborn]

Only one writer can write this the one who felt the pain, well written

[Frank F. Atanacio]

You were never sorry,
When you hurt me like this,
At least the night is starry,
And I still cry for you.

this last stanza is what punches it all up nice job :)

[Shelly Araujo]

your poem brings up feelings I've carried with me for a long time over the loss of a great friend. I didn't even realize how great until it was too late. I still cry over the loss every now and then, I still dream of the friend every now and then. Thanks for your beautiful poem!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Aww this is sweeet