The Cycle

The Cycle

A Poem by Ayisha Upshaw
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11/03/17

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From me 

To we 

To me 

Again 

      From two

      To three

      Not me

      Again 

            From we

            To me

            Just me

            Again.

© 2018 Ayisha Upshaw


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Nice flow of words and thoughts. I liked the movement leading to the logical ending. Thank you Ayisha for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I couldn't help but sing "Alone Again" as I read this poem. It's short and bittersweet, and the way it flows is great. Much enjoyed! Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A self explanatory autobiography in 21 words? Now that is impressive.
Uhm...gobsmacked, speechless. Well done :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've never in my life spent so much time pondering so few words. I like this a lot.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ayisha Upshaw

1 Year Ago

That is a huge complement!
I contemplated adding a footnote description but decided against i.. read more
Cadel

1 Year Ago

No, don't, it would take away from what it is by itself.
This is so sad and touching, It's almost like a Bittersweet. Keep up the good work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Ayisha Upshaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you!

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Ayisha Upshaw
Ayisha Upshaw

TORONTO, Canada



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