Disguise

Disguise

A Poem by ICE

Look me in the eyes

 

Tell me what you

Don't see.

I'm a shadow of myself...

And you,

No part of me.

 

Turn your face away

From this light

In my eyes.

See me through

Touch

 

Hold me without

Your lies

And see through this

Disguise.

 

 

© 2009 ICE


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Very poignant ICE. Very nicely put!

I'm a shadow of myself...

And you,

No part of me.

Something about that verse sings to me.


Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this...a great Poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love this...*smile*
Quick and smooth.
Very, very nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was a cool poem Ice I like how you used the mask in it

Great write!!! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 12 Years Ago


The short lines work well in this poem as they add a certain intensity, urgency to the plea. I like it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It takes courage to be oneself

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I completely understand this poem and i know i wear a disguise everyday!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece is something that many people will be able to realte to. Problem is, many people will not be able to admit it. We all have our daily masks to cover up apart of ourselves (I have several masks lol). Great write.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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