Disguise

Look me in the eyes

 

Tell me what you

Don't see.

I'm a shadow of myself...

And you,

No part of me.

 

Turn your face away

From this light

In my eyes.

See me through

Touch

 

Hold me without

You lies

And see through this

Disguise.

 

 

Reviews

[Cool Handless Luke]

Very poignant ICE. Very nicely put!

I'm a shadow of myself...

And you,

No part of me.

Something about that verse sings to me.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this...a great Poem :)

[Vesa Lee]

Love this...*smile*
Quick and smooth.
Very, very nice.

[Kelley]

That was a cool poem Ice I like how you used the mask in it

Great write!!! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Ellen Hammond]

The short lines work well in this poem as they add a certain intensity, urgency to the plea. I like it!

[Poeticpiers]

It takes courage to be oneself

[Rebel_angel]

I completely understand this poem and i know i wear a disguise everyday!

[Constance L. Hartwell]

This piece is something that many people will be able to realte to. Problem is, many people will not be able to admit it. We all have our daily masks to cover up apart of ourselves (I have several masks lol). Great write.