SHATTERED IMAGE

SHATTERED IMAGE

A Poem by Rob Santana
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Tortured soul

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Mirror's so eager

To expose my trangressions

 

My reflection

Bleeds pain and regret,

 

Sin is RED.....

 

Karma, is GOLDEN...

© 2014 Rob Santana


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Creative, clever, and captures the essence of the shattered image of a tortured soul. Nicely done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rob Santana

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much April.
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome.
Karma is Golden.. love it!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rob Santana

9 Years Ago

Hahahaha, Muchas gracias ...
Mirrors can often be a persons worst enemy...they show us who we really are. I believe in karma, what goes around comes around and it hits those who most deserve it for the bad things they've done in their lives or to other people. Sinning is a part of life, no one is perfect...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Those mirrors that are always so willing to show us all of our imperfections... sometimes you just need to shatter them and find a new reflection, one that shows you the light instead of the darkness...just my thoughts. Dark write, deep with pain and torment, good read as always. xoxo

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rob Santana

9 Years Ago

Thank you Kalypso...
Ghost of Jupiter

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...thought better of your drunken comments huh? lol
Rob Santana

9 Years Ago

No, Those comments were from deep in my heart. But I realized that they were personal, private words.. read more

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Added on May 17, 2014
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