You

You

A Poem by trippy kitty
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About a girl. Yes I have a school boy crush. No, I do not care if you insult me :P

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I don't know you.
You're almost a 
stranger.
You're another face,
in another crowd.
You shouldn't matter.
But you do.
I don't know why, but
it's your face I see when 
I close my eyes.
It's your laugh I hear when 
I go to sleep.
It's you. It's always you.
It has been you forever, ever
since you held my hand that day in
f*****g grade one.
It's a crush.
I'm just love sick.
I'm love sick for you.

© 2011 trippy kitty


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Ahh, I absolutely love this poem! I can relate and know the feeling well. I enjoyed reading this. Powerful and deep. =D Very well-written. I love the way you describe the love here. ^o^ Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


THis was wonderfully well written!! I liked to from beginning to end!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


No insult :)
I like the poem a lot :D
And I know the feeling.
Very well done :)

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I enjoyed this write. So nicely done, powerful strong emotions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


No insults here. :) This was cute, and I think most people could find themselves here.. thanks for sharing, well done. :)

~ rae

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lol, I do not see why any one would want to insult you about this write. This is a very nice write and also very cute, it has a deep expression of your crush even through the few words in every line and stanza through this piece. This was a lovely write and I really liked it! You should show this girl one day and let her read it if you guys become good friends one day! Once again, great write. Keep writing!
~Missy OwO~

Posted 12 Years Ago



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