Her

I once met this beautiful girl

She put my heart in a swirl

The sight of seeing her beautiful face

Just puts me in my own place

Her eyes so god damn bright

Left me without a clue

I got so lost in those eyes

I knew there were no lies

She now belongs in my heart

Trust me it’s a great start

Until night comes by

I can feel her nearby

With  hugs and kisses blowing

She leaves me here flowing

By the end of the night

Being with her is a delight

As I lay next to her

Everything goes into a blur

I close my eyes with her by my side

Knowing our love will never be denied

Author's Note

Jesus Christ I need a fucking life or something this is pathetic lol

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

I wouldn't exactly say it's pathetic. "I close my eyes with her by my side, knowing our love will never be denied". The ending always makes it or breaks it. That's a good ending--almost reminds me of what many writers call "emotional eroticism," where a man's expression of unconditional love comes to an exhausting spiritual climax while rolling in black satin sheets :)

[Gregory]

beautiful

[Smiles:)]

I think this is amazing. nothing else to say. its great :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Being in Charlie Sheen's bathroom would a sign of a bad life. The poem flow and story was good. In my time the beautiful woman turn to monsters when the lights are turn off. Some humor. Beauty is a good thing. Someone to create a smile and make you happy should be the goal of all of us. A very good poem.
Coyote