I love him

this is a piece of s**t which i literally had spit out

Innocence reflects your eyes

The sun..her dark,

Maybe your head was too dense

wouldn't let you shine.

The rain drowned the salty taste

Yet, all watch so close

All after the chase

A superficial overdose

i know who cares, 

they don't

So when you go to bed,

When you recall those moments,

Do you think of me?

The one who needs you..

What have you to prove

What have you..

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Wildecat]

This is a fantastic write, a definite pleasure to read your poetry.

[Kiara]

another brilliant piece!
you can feel the honesty
in your writing while reading
and that makes the experience of it so
much better : ) i enjoyed reading this
thank you for sharing -arabella

[Kaotic Barbie]

Once again, so very real. Its great you take your true feelings and make them into art.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a beautiful honesty in your work that moves with brilliance... Bittersweet darkness...

Craig