Prison Inside Our Minds

Where a prison dwells.

We reach out and feel

Past the bars

Past the steel

Past the cage that seals in our minds

A mind that reels every day of trouble

But holds onto hope

So I reach out past the cold

Past the bars of steel

To touch a light as bounces away

Ping pong, ping pong

I promise it has wings

Is this even real?

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

This was so nicely written and did represent the cage we feel inside our minds sometimes. It was great already, but the line 'Is this even real?' added another layer of depth to it.

[InkAndScrolls]

Thank you ♡

[Paul Bell]

I suppose it's what we do with prison in our head.
Sometimes it's there to protect, sometimes escape is a must.

[Robert Trakofler]

I am sending you a get out of jail card... i have two so i can spare one of them... and while your at it please pass go:) I don't know but from where i am standing seems like that prison in your mind isn't too constricting

[InkAndScrolls]

Maybe. You could be right though. :)

[James Paranormal]

wow, this is a powerful, soulful poetic vision expressed delicately.

[InkAndScrolls]

Thank you for your kind words.