Still...

Still...

A Poem by Inner Rain

I still feel you in my arms,
And i still hope that you're there.
I still long for your time,
And i still yearn to smell your hair.

I still jump when i hear your voice,
And i still swoon when i put on our song.
I still wish to have you close,
Even if it wont last very long.

I still sing of our kiss,
As if our love was brand new.
I'm still in love,
So why aren't you?

© 2011 Inner Rain


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Can be more constructive one, you can add life to it after expressing feelings you have about it. :) You can add the positive imaginations to it. More like a 'waiting for you' thing. Well what it is, its nice of its kind any ways. I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Didn't expect that ending! Well done. Sweetly put, simple prose, and very effective. Nice piece

Posted 8 Years Ago


Makes one sit and think about the answer to this. So very nicely written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love is not always fair thats for sure.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice and rhythmic. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on November 21, 2011
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Inner Rain
Inner Rain

City Of The Living



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Why I Write?! I love to write poems... Not really planning to make it a profession, i just enjoy it. I write to relieve stress, especially school-related stress and also so i can express my emot.. more..

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