Numbness

Numbness

A Poem by Inner Rain

Sweet temptation
Fragile lust
Deep infatuation
Gentle touch

Touch my hair
Kiss my lips
Make it last
Make me flip

Tell me you love me
Let me know it is real
Open my eyes, make me see
Help me to know, help me to feel

© 2011 Inner Rain


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Does numbness and being lost falls in the same category. I'm often confused about it. :) Well the poem has something more to tell than just its words, its nice. Decently written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


so true great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Definitely something I'm sure many can relate to. If you're not being stimulated to an extemity you're not feeling anything at all.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Too short and lovely to enjoy. Great.

Posted 8 Years Ago


very sweet!

Posted 8 Years Ago


what do you want to feel?

Posted 8 Years Ago


its good
you've put down feeling in it ...
i liked it

Posted 8 Years Ago


I feel a ceratin depth when I read this. I can feel the feelings. Intense write is what I got. So nicely expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on November 22, 2011
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Inner Rain
Inner Rain

City Of The Living



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Why I Write?! I love to write poems... Not really planning to make it a profession, i just enjoy it. I write to relieve stress, especially school-related stress and also so i can express my emot.. more..

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