Wind - A Haiku

Wind - A Haiku

A Poem by Intothemilkyway

Shivering winter
why a little, short wind plays
watching the music

© 2019 Intothemilkyway


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Winter and music are two concepts that work together very vividly in my mind and this poem marries them nicely. I like how you used the word "plays" and personified the wind.
I am curious about your use of the word "why". I can't quite connect it to the poems meaning.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I just love this format - and - in your share, you have encapsulated the essence of the subject matter most accurately - I can see the wind creating a little swirl of snow outside a frosted windowpane - nice one... :-)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Winter and music are two concepts that work together very vividly in my mind and this poem marries them nicely. I like how you used the word "plays" and personified the wind.
I am curious about your use of the word "why". I can't quite connect it to the poems meaning.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Intothemilkyway
Intothemilkyway

Albania



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I love writing . I write whatever comes in my mind. "To write whatever comes in your mind and make it a poem that is truly a poem". more..

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