We've All Been There

We've All Been There

A Poem by The Iron Horseman
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A vignette of family life.

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“Why should I?” the young boy said.

Yes, why should he? I agreed in my head.


“Because I said so?” It was worth a try.

“You've gotta do better than that. That won't fly.”


“Because it's the right thing to do?” Ever hopeful.

“Oh, woohoo! You said a mouthful.”


“Because you want to?” I know he won't.

“That would work if I did, but I don't.”


“Because you love me?” The last resort.

“That'll do it, Mum.” The loving retort.



© 2018 The Iron Horseman


Author's Note

The Iron Horseman
I think everybody has experienced some variation on this theme at some point in their family life, either as the parent or as the child. It is just intended to make you smile.

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A very good ending to the poem. Those mothers. Always too wise for us. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Iron Horseman

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words, John.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

A proper ending to the poem and you are welcome.
HA!!! I do this daily!!! Love it!!!

Yes, again! I do know other words besides "LOVE"! I will have to find some more adjectives to describe your work...

It's odd but I highly relate to your work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Iron Horseman

6 Years Ago

'Love' is always good to hear!
Why is it 'odd'? We seem to have a number of shared interests... read more
This did, indeed, make me smile. I love this conversation! I fell like the little bit of inner dialogue is spot on as a parent! Thanks for the smile!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Iron Horseman

6 Years Ago

Thank you, MMP. I'm pleased that it made you smile. I must admit that I was not sure anybody would b.. read more

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Added on March 15, 2018
Last Updated on March 15, 2018
Tags: children, love, humor, humour, poem, poetry.families, family life

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The Iron Horseman
The Iron Horseman

Canada



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Aspiring new writer. I enjoy writing stories, poems and song lyrics. In fact most of my poems are song lyrics! All constructive input is welcome. If you think something sucks, tell me so. I won't be o.. more..

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