Foolish Pride
A Poem by
Tiana
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Foolish Pride
Why do we put
each other through
so much unnecessary
grief and pain
when we both know
we belong together
and we're no good
without each other
You're miserable
without me
and I'm miserable
without you
so let's not allow
any foolish pride
to disavow
the love inside
Tiana 2010
© 2018 Tiana
Reviews
A real barrier to love and surrender. The twain must humble themselves, accepting the inevitable. Very nice and simply stated with truth.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thank you for your great review, Sami. Always a pleasure.
5 Years Ago
You are welcome.
i think it is pride's job to get in the way...and it usually succeeds.
When two people really love each other, but have some differences, pride will part the seas...
j.
Posted 6 Years Ago
i think it is pride's job to get in the way...and it usually succeeds.
When two people really love each other, but have some differences, pride will part the seas...
j.
6 Years Ago
I couldn't agree with you more, J. Thank you for commenting,
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Added on April 9, 2018
Last Updated on April 9, 2018
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