Rain Freeze

Rain ~ I love it.... just takes me to another place

~ Rain Freeze ~

 

I lean

lonnng

against the window

Frozen......

taken by the rain

 

Tracing pictures

with my fingertips

in the steamy window pane

 

Thinkin'.....

bout

your lipsssss....

as the picture

fades and dries

 

Love the feel 

of thunder

in my soul

a window to your eyes

 

It

Gets this way

When rain comes.

 

Drifts me to...

you

and

I

 

Makin’ sounds….like rain does.

Some …Undercover -”Rain Love”

 

Takes me back

to

Before

Before……”The Before”

Before……”The Good-bye”

Before……..the rain came down.

 

So…..I just sit here.

Frozen

Taken by the rain.

Wanting it…..to

Rain allllllll…night ,

Feels so....

good to drown.

 

© Jennifer Hampton 2007 bythewurd@yahoo.

Reviews

[Roy L. Pickering Jr.]

Watching raindrops fall down like memories, each one a time capsule of a specific moment in time, collectively washing over your consciousness and temporarily transporting you to yesterday in spite of the laws of physics. That's what rainy days often seem to be made for. The same can be said for beautifully executed poetry such as this. You continue to impress, Jennifer.

[M J Moore]

Oh, I love this!!! Thanks so much for sending it to me, and I'm sorry it took me so long to read it!

I can't figure out which part I love best. The only thing that could possibly add to this would be Evoca with your voice for extra emphasis. But I like the style you chose here, to add that emphasis that mere words couldn't get across, but the style just added sooo much to it, that emotion, that feeling, that picture and sense of being there and feeling that. Incredible! Fav!

[Mr. Deft Diction]

I won't even get too deep into this--I can't talk about rain and the emotions that come from it, so I'll just say...

EXCELLENT, J.

You already know...

[Bubo]

Takes me back��.to..
Before.
Before��.�The Before�
Before��..�The Good-bye�
Before��..the rain came down.

You have a way of echoing my thoughts every day.Beautifully written, and the drowning in memory and emotions.

[Brian K. Walters]

Very nice write :) Great portayal of the memory of passion

[Amy Widmer]

Erotic! Steamy... and a style all your own. Wonderfully done.