Naked I Came

Naked I came into the world of your essence.

 

You bathed me in beauty, washing over me like a warm summer’s rain. The temperature of my skin rising to an exquisite heat under the intense gaze of sky blue eyes.

 

You clothe me in silks of desire and passion. Caresses of cashmere and velvet kisses, weaving a veil over my consciousness until the realm of reality is enveloped into the abyss of you and I.

 

You nourish me with the poetry of your voice. Sweet whispers echoing dreams of entwined futures. Honey laden musings etching wanton impressions on my psyche.

 

Naked I came and naked I will leave, for without you I am and will remain, incomplete.

 

 

Reviews

[LadyLove]

This says much of what he means to you. Nothing is as vulnerable as being naked. To be such for someone with your inner self is the most trusting thing you can do. And for someone to give so much of themselves to you in kind is that reciprocated. Nice to see this form of love expression written out. Take care.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very sentimental... to show your vulnerable without your love... I found this to be so heartwarming but sensual.

[Mark Pearce]

This has nice sentiment, but I would love to see some unexpected adjectives and/or metaphors included. Surprise me with the love you're extolling.

[Damien Dsoul]

Your narrative style is very rich in impressionistic description, with a subtle tinge of irony. Your poem sasys more than it otherwise ought to in lengthy detail and feeling.

[rumpulpulsky]

This is the second poem of you that I read. I think I just love your style. Something about it, straight and simple, speak directly to me.