Spring in Winter

The days grow longer,

Spring flourishes all around,

And I am at peace

The seasons of man

Seldom align with nature.

My winter is now.

JE Falcon

04-07-2022

Reviews

[lightsong]

Warm and delightful first verse, The second verse speaks to me about a more deeper leve of a humans' nature. we should align with it because it's how we can create harmony and balance, even when You feel old, cold, sad or bitter in the middle of a beautiful Spring, hang on there knowing the warmth and blossom of Spring will bloom and flourish inside of You sooner or later. all the happy blessings sent to You my friend~

[JE Falcon]

And all the happy blessings right back at you. :) --- Have a great day.

[Pete]

shakespeare and steinbeck wrote of a 'winter of discontent'. a frame of mind or spirit follows a calendar not. just remember to dress appropriately, always stop to smell the roses and beware thorns... :)

[JE Falcon]

Ah, those thorns! Bloodstained and seldom forgotten. --- Thanks for your input.

[Susan 🦋]

Seasons of man indeed! Such is life this side of Heaven. How wonderfully you conveyed that in this poem. But a warm sunny day still helps ;-)

[JE Falcon]

So true, and thanks. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they go together, but work separately .....I especially like the second one...

one edit...second line should be "align"...

but the metaphors are strong.
j.

[JE Falcon]

Thanks, Jacob, I don't know why "grammar-check" didn't see it the first time. --- And thanks for the reading, happy you liked it.

[Cherrie]

In our winter Spring whispers forget me not in our ear

[JE Falcon]

So true. ...