Senryu in 4 Words

Video gaming

Extraordinarily

Counterproductive

JE Falcon

2015

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

clever to put a senryu into four words....
My gripe against gaming is that it keeps kids inside...not out getting exercise and getting to really be kids.
j.

[JE Falcon]

The same here, outside is better. Also, there have been studies that may indicate that adrenalin levels stay risen too long while gaming and elevated heart stress may be unhealthy. --- Thanks, Jacob.

[Betty Hermelee]

I would tend to agree with you, but it is so popular around the globe.... and my son works for Microsoft!!!!
It's a form of entertainment just like any other I suppose, never tried it....
a Senyru well crafted...
Best
B.

[JE Falcon]

I was trying for a three-word haiku but settled for this. --- Thanks.

[Betty Hermelee]

I liked it, clever.... you're welcome
Best, B