Soul's silent reflection

For A.

If i was there to put my hand on your chest 

I would have felt my own heart beating

Like looking in the mirror, almost

The reflection of your soul 

Your intimate thoughts and emotions 

I feel the heat of your bare skin

Words unspoken

Just a silent reflection of your soul

Reviews

[Laura S-C]

Wow I loved how you described this feeling so simply. It was a lovely poem.

[gentlekindness]

Lovely writing. You capture the various side of intimacy and express them well with your words.
good night for now,
Annie

[Rachael Lea]

This is absolutely beautiful. If only people spoke like this all the time.

[Breanna Riddle]

I love how you made two people as one being who share the same things. Wonderful use of words to create a loving image

[faked.reality]

wow, I really like this. I like the way it brings back some sweet memories :)

[Rachel McLean]

I love it
The way you put your words together is amazing as well
Beautiful imagery :)

[annalysiar]

Great imagery, this is a kind loving poem

[Tessa Melendez]

Pretty good imagery and touching words. I think you could add to it though and it would be a bit better. :)

[Tiana]

Wow! Another beautiful poem indeed! Look forward to reading more :)

[JMaster1]

Thank you so much

[silverwritinggoddess]

Beautiful reflection. I love anything that deals with reflections. Beautiful work!