Intellectual Sex

“Intellectual Sex”

 

Watching you sitting on the couch

So close to his Pierced n*****s

You were always attracted to

Intelligent, thought-provoking,

Philosophical men,

Men who could quote Whitman and sip wine

 

Watch you sitting on the couch

As he wet his lip's ring

You miss talking politics and religion

You miss that more than any thought of sex or romance.

With him, it is a fulfillment

Of an intellectual and sexual need.

 

I watch you,

Teasing me in your intellectual way,

I want to make love with you

I don't want your body,

It's too early

Forbidden

 

I want to make love

With your feelings,

With your most intimate

Thoughts and fantasies

Your confusions attract me

The way you use your lack of experience

As your powerful weapon

Make me want you

Make me want to get inside

Your mind

 

Teasing your thoughts

My fingers reach inside

Rubbing your fears

Touching your dirty thoughts

Kissing your memories

Feeling you still want him

So bad

 

Things forbidden always

Become more interesting,

you use a fantasy,

In order to protect yourself

From his temptation,

Your thoughts moan

Purring in a gentle way

I feel your heart whispering

Beckoning

Come to me

Come to make love,

I still want you

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

FIRST IMPRESSIONS

This is a pleasant stimulation of the erotic senses from the alluring title, captivating image, and purple font. Lavender tends to invoke calmness and serenity. It has been known to arouse men yet calm women. The writer displays attention to detail.

CONTENT AND FORMAT

The Whitman reference caught my eye because I adore Walt Whitman's poetry; it is sensual and you can read it as a stand alone by the sections on any page. As the title suggests, "Intellectual Sex" is seductive to females since we tend to romanticize sex. In contrast, men are visual and physical. Therefore, they court their ladies by means of impressing them with literature. Professors are notorious for this behavior. I think we can all agree that we have had sexual fantasies about our teachers.

I imagined the speaker as a female; an intelligent tease of a woman. She strikes me as a sensual being yet classy. The tone of poem comes off as classical but there are moments of blunt sexual details such as "fingers slip inside." The writer the does not hide behind figurative language but rather enhances it, creating a sensory overload.

PERSONAL CONNECTIONS

I adore erotica personally. It gives me a break from other intense reading material since I am diverse. Frankly, I want to read more erotica now instead of some serious work I was reading. I will certainly be keeping an eye on your writing.

Sincerely,
ria

[Faded]

The meaning of true nakedness in intimacy: captured here in the written word. Thought provoking, thorough and alluring.
Keep up your work, friend.
Faded

[JMaster1]

Thank you so much

[DMS_Dana]

The title caught my eye. There's nothing more attractive to me than intellect. I can relate to the intimacy of sex with someone who stimulates me with their intellect.

[Deandra Dawn]

You hit this on the deepest most erotic level you could. Intimacy is not just physical. It is emotional. Without the passion and the emotion behind it, well....it would just be a part of biology. So informal. I want to be crushed from the inside out. Touch the depths of the soul, drown yourself in each other's eyes, feed off your thoughts and fears...that is the biggest turn on. Romance and passion at its finest.

[JMaster1]

I knew you will love it

[HC Abiona]

Very nice, I like this... Especially the line... I want to make love with your feelings. With your most intimate thoughts and fantasies

[Celie Rose]

Enjoyed reading your poem..love the this stanza:
"Teasing your thoughts
My fingers reach inside
Rubbing your fears
Touching your dirty thoughts
Kissing your memories
Feeling you still want him
So bad"
I like the intellectual romance,
touched my soul.
imagery really good. intimate details
and description very revealing
had me feeling some kind of way,
for a brief moment.
your poem is well written and expressed.
keep up the excellent work.

[Philip Muls]

Masterful.

On the one hand there is the fact that she is in love with another than the writer. On the other hand there is the physical vs psychological dimension.

How you describe how your fingers reach inside her mind, how you touch her thoughts and kiss her memories. Brilliant, no other word for it.

[JMaster1]

Thank you very much

[мalғy]

I can't even, like that was the most mind gripping and in a way I think everyone needs someone like this. I am in true "awe" of this it was so beautiful and captivating. You are one with words.
-Tay

[tranquil_sky]

I love how you speak in a sense that is still able to completely turn you on without being deemed "dirty".

[JMaster1]

Thank you so much

[Mitch]

Most of the time an intellectual or emotional connection is a more intimate encounter than a physical one, and this hits that strait on. To think that you can make that interaction with someone as she is sitting beside someone else is even more of a , dare I say, intrusion? I liked how you laid out the mental game over the physical one. They have a lot in common.