Angel's

Little boy: Are you an angel?

Girl: What?

Little boy: I was told by my mom that those who have marks on their wrists are angels

Girl: Well, ignore these marks i am not an angel

Little boy: Why of course you are, my mom always told me that angels harm themselves

because they don't like life here on earth

This world is destroying them

So they always try to return to heaven again

They are too sensitive of the pain of others and their own

Girl: wow, you know kid

Your mom is really wise

Little boy: Thank you

She's also an angel but she already returned home.

Reviews

[Zephyr]

This is one pleasant read but the ending line brings sadness, which I think was intended.
Thanks for sharing this:)

[Joey Nizz]

The end is somewhat of a sad surprise,
Thank you for your review Neetha.

[Carol Cashes]

Sweet dialogue between children becomes profound truth - from the mouths of babes, as they say. This is very nice, Joey, and one of my favorites of yours.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much Carol, im glad to know that you've liked it ^^

[CAPOLAVORO]

Such innocence on the mind of that boy. I like innocence thoughts though.. It makes us wonder of the ideal. ;)

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

[Joey Nizz]

hehe yeah, when our minds wonder, THEY wonder ;p

Thank you for your review.

[Priyanshi]

Wow, beautiful piece, Joey.
Very well written.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you I appreciate your review :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure

[Eleise Trenda]

Beautifully written. Well done meh friend!

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much for your review :)

[Warrior]

one word effortlessly beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you :) i'm glad you liked it.

[APOORVA]

simple and mind churning
liked it

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you, i appreciate it :)

[Jes' Pi]

No words..I loved it, angel.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

This hit my heart so hardly. I have nothing else to say.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you for reviewing this.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome

[Abraham George]

may be all of us are angels , but we need to know ourself that we are a good angel or bad one.

last i know that kid lost his mom and he accepted that reality

[Joey Nizz]

You have to accept the fact that it happened, sometimes there's nothing else other than accepting it.