Poem for the lost friend.

Poem for the lost friend.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

It’s time to say goodbye.

Although we’re sad to see it end.

I’m just hoping you’ll remember.

I’ll always consider you a friend.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Awsome poem, we've all lost friends throughout our lives and saying goodbye never gets any easier

Posted 12 Years Ago


perfect things are made perfect in the eyes of imperfection! (: I ADORE YOUR POEM! not too much.. not too little.. nice work! -s

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem. 'Tis something that i could relate to in some ways.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awwww... :( this is sad... beautiful and sad

Posted 12 Years Ago


Definetly one I can relate to, when losing close friends it is hard to say goodbye. Reading this brought a tear to my eye, well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very sad. Nice write though. What I find very interesting is the way you killed it's flow with the punctuation you have chosen but then I read it again almost as a limerick not bad at all, there is a song. I do have one question - who is leaving who? or does it even matter?

Short,sweet, to the point. - Nice write.



Posted 12 Years Ago


Its good but i think you should expand it its to simplistic and not raw enough to pull it off but the message is good

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sure, I'll remember. So short.................. so sweet.








Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple to the point, and a little heart wrenching all the same. Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Saying goodbye to a friend is always tough. Memories like these are always bittersweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


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SuicidePact.
SuicidePact.

Not telling!, SecretVille., Australia



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