Poem for the lost friend.

It’s time to say goodbye.

Although we’re sad to see it end.

I’m just hoping you’ll remember.

I’ll always consider you a friend.

Reviews

[ShaneBerry]

brief, sweet, to the point. whoever this is for will remember these words on a rainy day when they need their friend by their side! simple diction and timid concept. very very sweet write kiddo! thank you for shareing! :) seems like it should be engraved on a momentum. would be a nice going away party present.

-S.B.-

[K-mo]

short and sweet, very good

[Geraldine]

It's simple but so true. ^^

[MandaBear]

awww i will consider you a friend if you need one :)

Sorry but this is too simple to make me like it or feel anything for it. It's like a greeting card. It doesn't tell me anything about why I should care about it. It seems it would mean something only to the specific person you wrote it for. Give me something I can sink my teeth into. You can do better.

[ba_mcfarlane]

I like

[Cassie Fraga]

I HATE "goodbyes!!!!
nice write!! short and straight to the point.

[mariah]

this is very sad, makes me think of the friends i have lost. good work though :)
--mariah

[zero binty]

This one is sad to me. I think that's pretty much why I've stopped saying "Goodbye" to people in my life.

[The White Wolf]

Yes, I believe I have had this exact thought many times. A very sweet sentiment. Saying goodbye is never easy.