We used to be friends.

You were pretty, you were kind.

Now to look at you I’d go blind.

Thought you were loyal, thought you were true.

Now I don’t know what to do.

You showed me your true face,

you became a total disgrace.

You used to be my mate,

now all you seem to be is a cheap date.

I wish someday we will reunite,

Someday we can forget this stupid fight.

Reviews

[zero binty]

Losing a friend is one of the hardest battles people have to fight. The switch from angry to leaving the door open to reunite is a good message.

[CRAIG A. THOMSON]

Take it easy, you're only young! Reading between the lines, I think you should put it all behind you. Your poetry is really good and it wont hurt you or answer back. So, loose yourself in your writing. It will never let you down.
Great stuff! all the best, Craig

[Thea]

Very powerful...It's hard finding a real friend but remember, in a relationship, there's always that factor of misunderstanding...
:)))

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Great feel after reading. Good.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Mixed feelings after a breakup.

"You showed me your true face,
you became a total disgrace."

"I wish someday we will reunite,
Someday we can forget this stupid fight."

Give it a little time, to make sure how you are really feeling.