Two hands

Two hands

A Poem by Canicus

Two hands holding my heart

both just stole it

I couldn't stop either one

between two my heart is split

 

One, the hand of my beautiful maiden

so soft, loving, and tender

I love her more than words can say

to her I can't help but to surrender

 

The other not so kind

digging it's nails inside, wanting to cause me pain

the dark princess I can not stop

my darkest fear it can obtain

 

One leads to a life full of

laughter, happiness, and affection

the other has horrid things awaiting

hatered, despair, maybe even screaming at my own reflection

 

Two hands hold my heart

one of the sick, twisted darkness

the other of my love, my life, my world

this life is going to  be a battle none the less

© 2011 Canicus


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Wonderful! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Super interesting poem and it made you think all the way until the end. I'm unsure what the other hand could be probably because I'm the worst reader in to poems in history. Nonetheless lovely poem that was completely bitter sweet. Great work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


great write good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yes, beautifully written. I like your writings which are having wonderful meaning with humanity.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love it...... its like darkness and light,your curious about both........lovely poem!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think its great! love the write, excellent:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bitter sweet and sad. It's deep but means a lot. Don't get pulled in by just anything. If you have to, take time away from it all. Your writing is exstreamly well and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for giving me the pleasure of veiwing it. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sweet and sad. Your love is a special girl. Keep her close by your side forever so she can always be there to fight the evil stealing your heart. Awesome poem. Loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I'll be with you through the battle baby, I promise!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow... I love this a lot. A really great write and thought. Need I say more? That is what I think. Awesome write.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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