A Poem by Canicus

As soon as I hold you

I will never want to let go

just wrap you in my arms

wanting time to go slow


You're amazing to me

you're everything and more

I love you with all my heart

you're all I could ever ask for


I want to fall asleep

by your side

and wake to see your smiling face

making me feel whole inside


I want our lips to meet

in the moonlit night

as the stars are over us

and I'm holding you tight


yearning for you

wanting to be together

hoping we'll be

together forever

© 2011 Canicus

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A lovely romantic poem. The yearning is apparent and you penned the emotion quite good. thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago

good work keep up the good work nice write

Posted 9 Years Ago

The 'together forever' idea I normally think is kind of corny. But this wasn't corny at all in context, it was wonderful. This was a beautiful poem, and I really enjoyed it for that. And I thought the last line really added to it (instead of sounding corny).

Posted 9 Years Ago

A wonderful write:)

Posted 9 Years Ago

So beautiful and lovely. Great flow. Awesome poem. Wish someone felt like this about me.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Lovely, beautiful, compelling! It's very 'fluffy' like a one shot, I see this in the point of view through a young man who loves a woman but she doesn't seem to want the same as him, close friends, they has a mishap once and kissed and now he's realising he loves her. I see it as that, however, I am sure that is not how you intended it to be. I guess, everyone just see's things differently.

Posted 9 Years Ago

My thoughts... this is very very nice. Lovely, sweet... that feeling of wanting to be with someone near them, and just be with them, you wrote that well in this.

Posted 9 Years Ago

That was a goregous poem to me.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow excellent very romantic

Posted 9 Years Ago

I really enjoyed this poem. I could feel the emotion in it. Keep on writing :DDD

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on November 16, 2011
Last Updated on November 16, 2011




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