Forever

As soon as I hold you

I will never want to let go

just wrap you in my arms

wanting time to go slow

 

You're amazing to me

you're everything and more

I love you with all my heart

you're all I could ever ask for

 

I want to fall asleep

by your side

and wake to see your smiling face

making me feel whole inside

 

I want our lips to meet

in the moonlit night

as the stars are over us

and I'm holding you tight

 

yearning for you

wanting to be together

hoping we'll be

together forever

Author's Note

your thoughts?

Reviews

[Sugar and Spice]

This is such a gorgeous poem, really sweet and heartfelt :)

[Kalika]

So sweet!!!Make's me wonder who their about...

[Walk away slow poet]

Such a wonderful sweet poem. very lovely!

[Day Dreamer]

An amazing poem bud. :) Keep writing! :)

[AJ Kristiansen]

You're very talented Joshua, I like this very much! Beautiful!

[Desmund Tiny]

so sweet...... especially the 4th stanza.... you pour your feelings here and the love is flowing through the lines.... I love it...... great write


~*~Des Tiny~*~

[Mary Fioratti]

You showed here your heart pumping...and your very true feelings dancing...
I guess that she is very, very special.. :-)
*Mary*

[ducky(:]

who ever you wrote this for is quite special and lucky to have a guy kind enough in her life to say this

[HeIsWe]

This is so sweet, this girl has to feel special.