What's going on inside me.

Don’t try my phone,

I just want to be left alone,

My mind feels so weak,

I don’t wish to speak,

Sadness fills my bones,

My heart, nobody owns.

I’m searching for my purpose,

Feeling forever worthless,

All I can do is cry,

I just really want to die.

Author's Note

I wrote from the heart, I wrote my current feelings :P

so far it's the only poem i have written this week that i thoought was any good..hope you like it.

Reviews

[CrimsonBlaze]

Aw D:!!!
A girl so awesome like you shouldnt be feeling like this. Hope your day brightens up and that youll be back on cloud nine... this poem describes my feelings when Im depressed or pissed or something like that but usually I carry out the actions...and then fail. -bangs head on door-
Hope your day will brighten -holds up bright yellow power burst to make the sky lighter than itnreally seems/

[fireblossom]

Sorry you are going through this, but at least you can write it out and do so really well. Life gets more tolerable later. ;-)

[Priscilla Sayers]

I hate, with all the emotion that is hooked upon that ugly word, your pain. I know the likes of this feeling, emptiness, void, hopeless. It hurt to read, I am so sorry that anyone has to feel this even though it is unavoidable at times. Everyone goes through this, even in the smallest doses, it is not a feeling I wish upon anyone, especially you, my dear.

[M.E.Lyle]

It's sad really, wishing to die. I think of all the great adventures I would have missed out on if I had died only a year ago. What makes me mad is that I'll die before realizing the world's outcome. Where will technology takes us? How will the world end, and what will my grandkids remember about me? Sounds a little selfish...I guess. I hope you get to feeling better about yourself soon. There's always a flower growing for you somewhere.

[Laura Storm]

I know for me it always helped to write things down. Also to just talk things through with someone. This is a really emotional piece. Hope you feel better soon.

[Missy Moooooo]

This is hard, I feel your pain. And I understand where you're coming from. :| I'm sorry

[tk]

it really helps when you write down what you're feeling. and honestly, you did a great job expressing your emotions through this piece.
simply crafted, yet the emotion is overpowering. and i truly can relate to this. :)
thanks for sharing this wonderful write! :D

[just is]

Oh wow i totally love this!
I get this feeling so much.

[Sunflower 20]

really well done. loved the rhyming. great job :)