(not finished) Ugly.

No plastic surgery.

No cosmetics of any kind,

Have what it takes to make my face fine.

When I stare at my reflection,

I don’t see beauty

All I see is beast within me.

My voice is all scratchy,

Not fair on poor ears,

You’d wish for my voice box to just disappear.

Author's Note

Hey guys, this is what I've been working on today...What do you think so far?? Should I continue??

Reviews

[MandaBear]

Yes i think you should go on! so very good so far :) good job!

[CHRIS ANDES]

great job!
you did it well =]

[Perfect Mistake]

Yes you should continue! So far its really good and vivid. Good work :3

[Mockingbird]

yes you should continue. it sounds like it's leading somewhere. poor thing sounds like she has body dysmorphia.

[SeventhSin]

Please finish! :) I really would like to read the rest!

[Krista Weiss]

Its really good! Definitely finish it :)

[Miss Alicia]

Please continue, it's good so far

[Who Cares]

It brought to tear to my eye... I can just relate so well. Thanks you for writing this it is great so far please continue this, please...

[?]

so far so good...

[mariah]

yeah i think its good and that you should definatly continue it. i feel like it will have a great message at the end. keep on going!
-Mariah