Take the crown

Got this while listening to Rage Against the Machine.

You've been found

This is a final round

Here comes a kill blow

You're way too slow

Get ready for this

I won't miss

 

You'll get immersed

In actions reversed

As you drown

I'll take that crown

Say Bye-bye

And night-night

 

I'm undefeatable

Not beatable

Abdictate now

I'll make you bow

Here come the rebels

Ringing their bells

 

I'll take that crown

Without a frown

I'm the new renegade

No one will come to your aid

It's time to disappear

When you're dead there's nothing left to fear

Author's Note

This is my first real attempt at rhyming, do you think it matches up to the rest of my stuff?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the movement and feel of this poem. Remind me of a good boxing match reading your words. No weakness in this poem. A strong poem of action and strong emotions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rayne Stanton]

nice job! i love the flow and creativity, but it seems that the last line might be out of place just a bit. besides that fantastic write!

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Nice rhyming.