Numb

You'll tell me what to do

I'll say F**k you

You'll scream foul

I won't care

You've abused me

Taken advantage

Of the situation

Too many times

Now I'm numb

I don't care anymore

You can do anything

It won't affect me

Your long term effects

Have cauterized my mind

My heart only keeps me alive

I'm suprised it can manage that

After all this time

Reviews

[Rayne Stanton]

nice and rebellious! great!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow and the strength in the words in this poem. The poem is direct and honest. I like the complete poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
"Your long term effects
Have cauterized my mind"
So many strong statements in this poem.
Coyote

[M.Babu]

I find poetry is one of the best places to blow some steam and vent away.

This piece was very strong and to the point. Hope it liberated your thoughts?

Keep writing my friend!

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Intense