Ever So Tragic

How I felt at the time.

Ever so tragic

Your face lost its magic

It got lost in the ashes

burned cities so lavish

and they all fall away

While death is still on display

in the undercurrent of the night:

"La peine dans l'aire noire"

be it ever so trite that to

replicate life

I must tear from a page

duplicate art that can only be

a mirror

Ancient waters quivering with

fright

At the reflection contained

the first beautiful fight

between the divine and

the flesh

Tragedy from light.

Reviews

[Luissanto]

Your writing is very expressive and eloquent. I enjoy your style
of writing very much. I look forward to reading more...

[A. Amos]

I enjoyed the expressions of feelings you shared. Love your style of writing brilliant and elegant. Thanks for sharing

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

If this you felt at times....than its awesome very nice poem!