Wadded-Up Poem

Wadded-Up Poem

A Poem by James

"It was a good poem,"
the poet said to his poet friend.
"I think it's your best work yet."

The poet offered a smirk 
as he watched his wadded-up poem float away.
"It doesn't matter, no one would have read it anyway."

© 2017 James


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The feeling I get from this is one I can totally understand and relate too. How can we learn if there is no feedback?



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

7 Years Ago

That is one reason we are here. Poetry sites have been slow all over.
A very subtle nudge for every reader who writes too; automatically makes them question their own motives for writing. Like asking someone to not think of an elephant.
Nicely done James.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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James

7 Years Ago

Exactly, thanks.
in some ways it doesn't matter because we write for ourselves, on the other hand it does feel good to share and have others relate to you

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Ana Papaya

7 Years Ago

shall i bring balloons then? :)
James

7 Years Ago

Thanks Ana, I appreciate it. And balloons might help
Ana Papaya

7 Years Ago

Whiskey it is then... :)
Interesting. That's a very important distinction. Do we write for the joy, the outlet, the self expression, or to be read, understood, felt?

Posted 7 Years Ago


James

7 Years Ago

All of the above

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