My Vatican

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the sweet whiff of moisture. the rainbow ploddingly fads away into an invisible gleam. youngsters playing in the puddles of mud with their mothers shouting at them. this creaking coming from my wooden rocking chair is all the harmony I covet. the butternut tree in my front yard proveds water droplets to trickle down to earth. oh yes all this is my Vatican. heaven at its finest. and I'm the one who gets to look at its immeasurable glory

Author's Note

i love to write

Reviews

This is beautiful. I love how you've made it so that it feels like we're really there. Nature rocks!

[Melina A. Cambree]

This is really great

[Domo]

Nice poem man.

[Fran Marie]

A very feel good piece, beautifully penned in poetic expression~

Am Loving the serene imagery within this verse; nicely donE!!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very peaceful.. painted a short clip of great imagery.. from that of those moments spent relaxing on a front porch.. just absorbing the daily routines of others.. but still much can be taken in and enjoyed from a distance.. a portrait of life. I enjoyed this very much thank you for sharing! =)

[Free Writer]

This painted such a beautiful picture for me! I could see it all so clearly, this is wonderful! Great work!

[Daynise Couch]

This piece creates a feeling of security for this character. "this creaking coming from my wooden rocking chair is all the harmony I covet" Good line. Good job. I enjoyed reading this.

[Andrew'sWonderland]

Tranquil, Colorful, and Beautifully Written!! Another really great write that is rich in imagery!!

[Justin D]

Ahh this has a calm aura about it. It takes me back to the few good days in my childhood. keep up the good work :)