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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
One Day

One Day

A Poem by Jason Shadows
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You Will See.

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"Cryptic Love Lingers With Hope.
 Rolling Down Hates Rocky Slope.
 Elusive Between Now And So Far.
 Holding Onto Your Destiny In A Jar.

 Breaking Sadness Before It Deepens.
 Tender The Moment So It Hastens.
 Rushing Into Judgement Weakens.
 Little Light Left Starts To Darkens. 

 Such Rhythm Fades Slowly Apart.
 Breaching The Waves Of The Heart.
 Crushing And Then Bringing It Back.
 To Life With A Tear That's In My Sack.
  
 I Hold Onto What's Left That Is Precious.
 The Guideline To The Forever In Words.
 That You Said With A Cold Skip Of Breath.
 One Day You Will Miss Me As I Walk Away."

© 2012 Jason Shadows


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"Cryptic Love Lingers With Hope"

It has been my expierence that it is better to let go. Memories eventually fade, to where the hurt isn't as deep (for me atleast)

So much written within the words here, so much can be felt. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful, eloquent, tinged with a solemn undercurrent of subtle emotion. Thanks for sharing this, I enjoyed reading it. ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 17, 2012
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Tags: Fantasy

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Jason Shadows
Jason Shadows

I'm your shadow within the light., NC



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