I Told You

It Would Come To Be.

"If The Darkness Takes Me Tonight.

 Promise To Hold Me In The Light.

 I Need This Pain So I Feel Life.

 Again In The Cold Rain I Strife. 

 Is This Life Worth The Time?

 I Invest My Soul Into Something.

 That Doesn't Matter To You.

 But It's Become Fragile Now.

 My Process To Love Is Over Written.

 By The Lines Of Hate Frozen Within.

 Controllable By Question. 

 Dissolving Inside Me.

 Frighten By My Actions.

 I Evolve Into A Shadow.

 Hiding, Hoping To Escape.

 It's All Right There Hidden.

 If I Forgive You For Your Betrayal.

 Then Who Forgives Me For My Failure?

 But You See The Good In Me Too.

 Then You Came To Me I Told You.

 But Here Within This Shadow Flame.

 My And Your Heart Are The Same."

       

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

I feel the pain and despair in this piece as the narrator attempts to make sense of it all, a relationship whose depth wasn't felt by two...rather one heart, giving and not receiving... The first two lines are intense and quickly drew me in to a world of shadow and flame... fine work ...