Toxic

Toxic

A Poem by Jaspar

Like ashes of a cigarette 
So fragile and used up
The fading smoke
On which I choke
Reminds me of you

-Jaspar

© 2015 Jaspar


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Short and sweet, but a complete winner. I really don't know which line I love the most :) I wish it were longer!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jaspar

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the positive feed. It helps to inspire me to keep writing. Thanks again(:
BlaqkShadow

8 Years Ago

Keep going :D
When I advise somebody to quit smoking, I tell him what do you do when you finish smoking the cigarette? he answers: I throw it and stomp on it, i say to him: it will stomp on you oneday and kill you. The relations that some peopel have are like their relation to a cigarette, they use it till the last bit, then they throw it to the ground and stomp on it.

Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Jaspar
Jaspar

Port Colborne, Ontario, Canada



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Hello Hello! I'm Jaspar. I'm into writing, music and art in general. I just though it would be cool to put some of my writings online to share with and interact with other like minded individuals. So .. more..

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