Loss

I wrote this thinking of my uncle who passed away very young.

You were taken away so young

with barely anytime to know

just who you would become.

I wish you could just see

who I've come to be.

One more day with you

would be a wish come true.

R.I.P AJF <3

Author's Note

Be honest and let me know what you think. Poetry is not my strongest point, so I would love some pointers

Reviews

[justdandy]

This truly touched my heart.... Reminds me of my relative that died a few years ago... I wish that he lived longer, I wish that he would've seen what I'vs had become... Losing someone this close to you does really hurt. .... I wish I could see him this last time and just be able to say "Good-Bye and see you in Heaven."

[Kat]

I'm sorry about your loss, thank you for reviewing my poem :)