We Fall Without Falling

hmmmm

I wish I may,
I wish I might,
to love you now,
and hold you tight.

Once every year,
let's lay outside
and make selfish wishes
for ourselves that night.

I wish upon
the stars that fall.
But you go and wish
on the high and steady one.

Why do you do so?
I ask in despair.
You turn to me
and whisper,
with gentle care,

My wish is for you,
I will not let you fall.
We make one,
even though we are two.

Reviews

[sabrinareveles]

I like it to :)

[BluRaven aka Bootsy]

im feeling this, i like it because it takes a turn away from the twinkle twinkle little star. and it has its own twist in atmosphere. great work

[Angelic Surrender]

Beautiful :)