set me free

set me free

A Poem by J.A.N

You set me on fire, set me free

Burning inside, burning out

I never screamed for Mercy

© 2011 J.A.N


Author's Note

J.A.N
I know this is a very short poem,
poem, if you'd like to call it that.

I had thought I could piece it together with
a few other lines I had written, but nothing
quite seems to fit. Thank you for reading.

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I loved it.

I get what you mean by piecing it together with other lines but nothing fits; I have many of those pieces but I hold on to them eventually they fit lol but I am glad you posted this got me thinking I should post a few of mine



Posted 8 Years Ago


For being that short, that was an awesome poem. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I always enjoy short little poems. Three lines translate so beautifully. Nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The words are just enough! It's amazing how a short poem like
that get's the mind spinning. The feeling I get from it is..sort of like..this person is burning because of someone, and it hurts, but she never tells him to stop.
It just sort of is.

- A

Posted 9 Years Ago


amazing. you've been through so much and it all just translates into beautiful poetry.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Again, very simple words, yet they find the beauty in things that would not be considered beautiful. Mercy, hate, anguish, fire, hate, etc. I like this a lot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


it is a short poem indeed..but sometimes the best poetry can be described in few words(: you did very well on this poem! i really liked it! thanks for sharing that with us here on cafe (:

gabbyyy

Posted 9 Years Ago



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