Private Hell

My "Private Hell", What's yours?

Iggy Pop - Private Hell

Pictures of trivial things

Reliving excellent anguish

Identity often in question

Vested in self, not taking any help

Aiding and abetting her

Taking her sexual bribes

Enchanted by her desperation

 

Hesitating when I should have reacted

Everyone knows now, don’t they

Laughing, but I’m no joke

Love has been my private hell.

Author's Note

Baby Ricochet made a comment about Iggy Pop being awesome, I agree so this was inevitable. Tell me anything you want, What's your private hell?

Reviews

[Mark]

I was married to Satan herself for 20+ years. I escaped. :)

[Jessica Gillitzer]

Never married myself, i refuse for that to be one more of my hells. >_<
I hope you enjoyed this? ;o)
< 3 Jessie

[Mark]

Yes, it is always nice to connect with a work, even if the connection is rooted in an old hell. LOL

[Jessica Gillitzer]

gotcha, thanks mark. and yea it is great to connect and feel something someone else wrote. I am in love with this place. =oD
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[Acucena G.]

wow, that is deep , my private hell is a secret I can't share lol , great job

[Jessica Gillitzer]

Thanks but you were supposed to share some of it >_< rrrrr...
oh well glad you liked it lol =o)
< 3 Jessie

[Acucena G.]

ha ha ha , okay I will share

[Jessica Gillitzer]

yeah!
=o)

[Acucena G.]

done

[Chris]

Hell is where you find it - and sometimes how you survive it. ...and "it" is one mean SOB.

[Jessica Gillitzer]

so true Chris so true.
:)

[B-poet]

This is very intriguing and backed by a powerful message regarding the dangers of undying love towards the wrong party (male or female). Great job here. A thought provoking read. :)

[Jessica Gillitzer]

awww thanks Bpoet, that was very nice i am glad you see something i was trying to say in this. i wasn't sure I don't really do acrostic.
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[Simon Welsh]

Wow.. took my breath away!

[Jessica Gillitzer]

I didn't think it was anywhere near that good I have only done two of these ever and this is the second what was your fav. part?
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[Simon Welsh]

The second stanza; particularly that last line :) speaks to me xx

[Jessica Gillitzer]

Thanks sweety =)
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[zainul]

Very lovely piece.
Is it an acrostic piece?

[Jessica Gillitzer]

I think it is at least that was what I intended but I wasn't sure if it qualifies as one for sure. I am glad you found it lovely. =)
< 3 Jessie

[zainul]

Thanks for stopping by.
Let's see how the experts respond.
They are around and may stop by soon :)

[Jessica Gillitzer]

eeeekkkk, i worry about me in comparison to alot of the writers on here, they are light years ahead of me.
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[zainul]

Don't worry.
They will come closer to you soon :)