The Breath of Heaven

The Breath of Heaven

A Poem by [email protected]!
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Emotion Workshop poem for Creative Writing:)

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Happiness

Like warm, yellow sunlight on the earth

It happens when emptiness is vanquished in a breath of God

and the laughter of children resounds in the air

Happiness

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I can't decide if it's summer with its warmth I feel after reading this, or autumn with the sunlight laying on the brown leaves. Either way a great poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is beautiful. You have a very nice poem! enjoyed it! x0 Thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


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short but i like it still
way awesome

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I thought of my two little grand-daughters giggling... thank you!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are a breath of fresh air! I love your conviction! -:3 )~~~

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside... ^-^

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on August 19, 2008
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My name is Heather, I'm twenty, future author and english teacher, highly analytical, The Vampire Diaries, A Tale of Two Cities, both classic and modern literature, the Victorian era, Coco Chanel, ext.. more..

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