The Breath of Heaven

Emotion Workshop poem for Creative Writing:)

Happiness

Like warm, yellow sunlight on the earth

It happens when emptiness is vanquished in a breath of God

and the laughter of children resounds in the air

Happiness

Reviews

[Bare trees]

I can't decide if it's summer with its warmth I feel after reading this, or autumn with the sunlight laying on the brown leaves. Either way a great poem.

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

That is beautiful. You have a very nice poem! enjoyed it! x0 Thank you for sharing

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short but i like it still
way awesome

[AK]

I thought of my two little grand-daughters giggling... thank you!

[Little Mouse]

You are a breath of fresh air! I love your conviction! -:3 )~~~

[The Autumn Faerie]

Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside... ^-^