Thirst

Hope y'all like it!

There's this
insatiable thirst
to know every crevice,
every curve
of your body,
to feel the ridges
and the satin
that encompass your skin,
drawing every feeble breath
that escapes me
in an attempt
to avert my eyes
off you.

Author's Note

Reviews and criticism, appreciated.

Reviews

[rashu]

nice try..short but sweet :)
that's all i can say
keep it up:)

[Surya pradha]

beautiful poem, sent a jolt through my body, don't know why. well written!

[Simran Kewlani]

This can be interpreted in two ways. I like the way you have kept an open mind while writing. Good work, girly. I missed reading your writings . Take care. xx

[Mayank]

Beautiful, I can see the words are very carefully chosen and they just melt in a readers' heart.

[Saddam]

A very nice one. Great, it is a nice to the heart. fell so closely.

[xDalliance]

Haha thank you!

[Saddam]

It is a nice one dear... you are most welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the honest tone of the words. When someone tempt us. We hunger to see and know everything. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[xDalliance]

Hey, there! You're always with the sweet comments. Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. A well written poem.