All The Hurting

Tears fall from my eyes

I just can’t help it anymore

I am rejected and neglected,

Feels like my heart has been broken,

Has been abused and damaged in all the hurting

 

All this burden in life

All this loneliness,

Loneliness that is too much for me to take,

That if I take it I might get insane,

Insane in all the pain that this heart is feeling

 

Please help me God

I am torn apart inside

As time goes by,

And as people pass by and hurt me,

People that I still love even in all the hurting.

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Awards

Painful

Oct 9, 2010

• SICKNESS
• All The Hurting

Fifth - Amazing

Nov 17, 2010

• Hurting The One You Love
• All The Hurting

Third Place

Nov 29, 2010

• Dark Love Poem
• All The Hurting

runner-up voter preferred love poet

Mar 7, 2011

• Can love be real?
• All The Hurting

Was tearing up. 2nd

Mar 17, 2011

• Make Me Cry.
• All The Hurting

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A heartbreaking read with a defiant and almost uplifting ending. In the sense that they can hurt you but they can't ruin your spirit and despite all the hurt you still love them and life. That's a powerful and thought provoking ending. This piece is very good however I'd try working on opening your poems with more intriguing and unusual opening lines. Rather than saying in the opening line 'Tears fall or I am grieving or weeping. Let the rest of the poem say that in the emotions you express later in the poem. You need a less obvious opening. That said you write well.

[Senseless whatever]

excellent write. The emotions are bleeding from the page on this one. Just self wallowing and the image of sinking or shrinking into oneself. Great job.

[M Garcia]

You can really feel the pain.

[AreWeBothCrazy]

Your emotion really hit me hard here. well done, nice write :)

-AreWeBothCrazy

[M.Kilani]

A true heart break, yet a beam of love at the end, amazing, sad but true, it hurts when people depart our lives, lonesome hurts as well, yet the love we hold inside is more enough to cover up our dismay. even a shattered heart have love for others, and there is hope even for those who have been cursed ... well done ... keep up the good work

[Cassiopia Summers]

This has great emotion within, wonderful writing. You've created the paon of heartache with these few choice words. Wonderful poem, and well done.

the pain inside you described it in this poem.Be patience god will help you

[luciddreamer]

I have been here so many times....this is a gutwrenching, sad, depressive write and it shows the true cracks of a broken heart...brave write...thanks for sharing this with me :)

[Aven]

I felt your heart break!

[Bee]

YOU ARE NOT ALONE>> don't worry.

[Emotionally Blank yet F..]

I like it a lot. Few spelling issues but all's good in the hood! :) you got your point across very well. Great Job!